What did you not like about it? Those heavy strokes near the face gives it a sense of motion which is something you usually don't see in your work. Although it has a tranquil feel to me, like the wind is blowing creating that motion.
what are you studying? and ive been trying to get art off the back burner but my surgery has put me back a lot. Im working and saving too for when I transfer to another school and a full time student! But good luck